Ordareesa Admin
Posts : 79 Join date : 2012-08-07
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| Subject: Chapter One Sun Aug 19, 2012 2:53 pm | |
| ~CHAPTER ONE~ Long ago, a young beautiful white wolf with golden yellow eyes walked through the not yet claimed and unknown territory. The fae was here for one reason, and one reason alone, so she could fulfill her mother's wish, for her one last living daughter to ascend the Alpha throne. The she-wolf, Ordareesa, meaning, to live and laugh at the top. Reesa made her borders quick and waited deep in side the forests range, waiting, waiting... A gray and white female, a little older then herself came strolling in, in search for food and water, Ree saw a special bond between them and they became friends almost instantly, Tearla, a hunter of the Green Wood Pack. The two faes expanded the territory slowly, made a camp and hunted the forests of their rich prey. One day as they were on a small walk Reesa noticed a new scent, of course her excellent hunter had already read her mind and was dragging what looked like a brown male wolf from a bush, his name was Daiya, his fur with what seemed like millions of different hues of browns and dirty grays. Ordaree looked over at Tear, then at the new male, Dai, that her bestie had fallen for the brute, she could just see it, like in a best friends point of view way. The three of them were a great trio and made every day the most of it. As the three wolves head back to the camp one afternoon, Reesa notices rustling in the bushes, Tear looks away as she sees not one, but two wolves hiding and watching the three. A yearling, golden furred fae walked out of the bushes and shuffles her paws as she tries to explain her reasons, Reesa nods at Tearla to take the wolf claiming to be named, Kana, as an apprentice. The white fae smiles thinking on how it wasn't to long ago where she was the wolf randomly walking through unknown territory. The fae turns to Dai, her Sentinel, as he deals with a gray fae, as Reesa asks her of her strengths so she can place her on the ranks the gray she pauses and avoids eye contact as she mutters she is a Shaman. Reesa, shocked as she is lets her join without further questioning. Ord leads the new two to the camp as Tear and Daiya trail behind. Days passed as the new pack chatted, hunted, played and just hung out when Reesa decided to take out the apprentice, Kana, out for a hunt. Anyone who got this privilege was very lucky as for the most part the alpha did not hunt with the pack but instead with the beta or mate. The alphess showed Kana the basic hunting crouches and when she was ready the searched out a scent trail that led to a herd of Mountain Goats. The two strategized their plan, followed up by making their kill on a middle aged dam that was among the herd. Ree congratulated Kana on her impressive achievement and on their way back to where Tear and Daiya stood waiting they noticed a fae! Almost passed as she was, dying, hungry and starved, beat up to the worst extent, Reesa's eyes filled with worry for the anonymous orange female, she dragged the fresh kill over to her letting her feed on it, she seamed to regain most of her energy, spite her blood crusted fur, she appeared all right. With maybe a tad of sympathy for the fae she let her join and the two of them headed for the river to clean her off, normally Reesa hated water as she was very careful to keep her fur perfectly groomed, Ree made this occasion an exception, after Feather, the new Healer wolf, was cleaned off, they splashed each other playfully as the sun's darkening golden beams shone and reflected on the river 's surface. | |
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Fellaree Admin
Posts : 201 Join date : 2012-08-28
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Sat Sep 01, 2012 2:50 pm | |
| Great idea to add the history! Don't you all think? Can't wait for second chapter! | |
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Kana
Posts : 53 Join date : 2012-08-28 Age : 25
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Sat Sep 01, 2012 4:17 pm | |
| Yeah, I really like it. I love how you describe all of the characters entrances. | |
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Jay
Posts : 36 Join date : 2012-09-01 Age : 26 Location : Pigfarts XD
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Sat Sep 01, 2012 4:46 pm | |
| It's great! Love the whole idea | |
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Kyo
Posts : 41 Join date : 2012-08-30
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Sat Sep 01, 2012 7:25 pm | |
| Totes agreed. I like how it ends with ma mommy | |
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Ordareesa Admin
Posts : 79 Join date : 2012-08-07
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:01 am | |
| Thanks guys! I should put up the Second chapter up by the end of the week! I'm a bit busy, school and whatnot... probably soon. | |
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Zander
Posts : 152 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 28 Location : In your basement
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:44 pm | |
| Awesome history i truley love it! Cant wait until the secound chaper is up! ^^ | |
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Zaylex/Keli
Posts : 280 Join date : 2012-08-30
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:04 am | |
| Wynd comes next!!! YAY! And soon, Convel! | |
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Fellaree Admin
Posts : 201 Join date : 2012-08-28
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| Subject: Re: Chapter One Sun Nov 04, 2012 2:01 pm | |
| Okay, I know this should have been done along time ago, I'm making the second one right now, should be posted later today and for some weird reason tomorrow, but most likely today. After that I think I will post one once a week, every sunday. I will try to at least Lawl... On P. 5 out of 500... this may have a LOT of chapters | |
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